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Windows on the world
Short Stories and Other Fiction
BIRTH ~ A Story for 4 Voices
(first
published at www.write-away.co.uk March
2000
and at www.authorsden.com August
2000
CONCEPTION Jonathan
This
has happened so many, many time, but always I seem unprepared for the gradual
descent into cotton wool. I start by trying to hang on ~ to wisdom,
understanding, awareness of the universe, the glorious vision of evolution, but
most of all to that warm feeling of unity. Once I stop clinging it is much
easier. The cotton wool is not so bad in itself, just so three-dimensional after
what has been before. I allow myself to drift, losing all sense of direction,
purpose, time . . . From
a great distance a voice is calling "Come to me!" Sally
I
had been looking at the calendar for a few days ~ checking the dates, but also
trying to listen to my body. Both ways told me 'tonight's the night!' I prepared
a light dinner and encouraged Dave to talk about his day. When I finally
suggested an early night I could almost hear the penny drop! He spluttered and
blustered, but then was very attentive and tender. For all that, I wasn't quite
there for him. I could sense my baby out there. In my mind I called out to him:
"Come to me, come to me!" Dave
I
suppose I was a bit slow on the uptake. Sally had probably been working it out
for days, but I have been a bit pre-occupied with work lately. Fortunately, she
enjoys listening when I tell her about the problems, and how I intend fixing
them. Anyway, when I finally realised that the timing was right I gave it all
I'd got. Kissing, fore-play, all the stuff that seems not to matter so much when
you've been married a few years. It worked, as well. I've never heard her call
out like that before. "Come to me," or something. I didn't need
telling! I
might have dozed off a bit afterwards, but I could tell by her smile that I
haven't lost my touch. 4
MONTHS Jennifer
Mummy said she will have another baby. I will play with it. It can sit
with my dolls, and I will tell them all what to do. If they are naughty I will
smack them all. It won't be my favourite, though. Katy will always, always be my
special favourite. The baby next door cries all the time. Our baby will laugh
when we play games. Dave
Somehow it doesn't seem as exciting the second time around. When Sally
was having Jennifer there was the spare bed-room to decorate and I was busy
looking after Sally. This time she is standing up to it really well, never
complains. Just as well, because this month's figures are disastrous. If we
don't turn the corner soon I don't know what will happen. I've started going in
to the office a bit earlier in the mornings to try to make sense of it before
the phones go mad again. Sally
This
is a dream pregnancy. With Jennifer I felt big and sick and tired the whole nine
months, but somehow Jonathan just resonates on my wave-length and I positively
glow with health and happiness. I haven't told Dave about the name, yet. I'm
just waiting for the right moment, but he always seems so tired in the evenings.
I don't even know where the name came from, but just as I was so sure I had
conceived, I know that this little person inside me is called Jonathan. Jonathan
Blackness
. . ..............
Timeless . . ................
Floating . . . 7
MONTHS Dave
God,
what a nightmare. 24 redundancies in the last month. Joe's wife is dying from
cancer, Harry's wife is pregnant - same stage as Sally. I must be a right
bastard to do it to them, but what choice have I got? Probably be my turn soon.
I daren't talk to Sally about it any more, she'd only worry, and that wouldn't
be good for Jonathan. I don't know where she dreamed up that name, but I'm glad
I haven't had to pore over books every night to chose it. It doesn't help that
Jennifer has suddenly started being awkward. Always tugging at me, wanting to
play. She's going to have to grow up a bit when we have a new baby in the house. Jennifer
Daddy
doesn't love me any more. He never plays with me like he used to. And he shouts
at me. And Mummy is always tired. I hate that baby. And they want to call it
Jonathan. What a horrid name. Don't they know if it's a boy it HAS to be called
Leonardo. My friends will all laugh at me when I push Jonathan in his pram.
Perhaps I'll push it too fast and he'll fall out like my dolly. Then everything
will be like it was before. Sally
Well
Jonathan, I guess the honeymoon period is over. Still two months to go, but the
way you move about you seem to be telling me you're ready now. What happened to
that glow I had? All I do now is sweat, and heave my body about from one chair
to another. I ache all over. The only time it stops is when I go swimming. Not
so much swimming as floating. You like that, don't you, Jonathan? Jonathan
i
have no past no future i just am i am part of another being there is a cord of
love it nourishes me i am constrained i push there is resistance i am carried in
big lumbering jarring steps i take the love through the cord sometimes it is not
there sometimes
the other one comes close and there is tension and sorrow perhaps i am not safe
i try to hide after the sorrow there is tiredness then floating everything
floats it is such a relief. Sally
It's
down to us two, now, Jonathan. Jennifer sulks all the time and I really worry
about Dave. He comes home late, misses dinner, doesn't even tell me about his
day anymore. He probably finds me repulsive, but I can't bear to think that he
might have begun to wander. He was such a flirt before we married, and there are
all those attractive un-pregnant girls in the office, but I can't challenge him
now. All my energy is for you, Jonathan. BIRTH Dave
In
the end I just walked out of the meeting. There are times in your life when you
just know where the priorities are. If they really want to sign a contract with
us they will still be there tomorrow. And if they aren't, so be it, I will take
redundancy and it won't be my problem any more. Sally looks so confident as if
she knows exactly what to do. I hold her hand and feel useless. Push! I find
myself calling out with the doctor. Sally is panting, looking determined. Push!
This is the only thing that matters. That little baby in there is making this
tremendous journey and whatever help we can give he still has to make it by
himself. Push! God, I don't care about the contract, I don't care about the job,
just let Sally be all right, just let Jonathan be all right. Push! Jennifer
Daddy
suddenly rushed out for me. I had to leave the Lego house I was building. I
wasn't scared, well, just a teeny-weeny bit. Mummy was panting and grunting, and
people were shouting push, and then out he came. He didn't look like a baby at
first, then they wiped him and I could see his little face. He isn't a bit like
my dollies. His little arms and legs are moving and his fingers are stretching.
I just want to hold him and look after him. Why am I crying? Sally
I
just want it all over now. I want to see Jonathan, this human being I know so
intimately. Push! Dave came rushing in at the last minute, as usual, but then I
really felt he was there for me. He promised to bring Jennifer in for the last
few minutes if it is not too gory. Push! These spasms are coming faster now.
It's as though I am looking down at my own body. I can feel the pain, but when
the doctor shouts push Dave joins in and so do I. I don't know what Dave has
been going through these last few months but I know there isn't another woman.
Push! Jonathan is moving down. Rest, just for a minute, then push, push, push!
Then he is in my arms and Dave is crying and so is Jennifer. I hope she isn't
scared. I let her hold him and she smiles through her tears. He is so beautiful. Jonathan
my
world is contracting, the waters are running away, i have to get out, i don't
know where i am going but i have to push, push, push, there is a roaring sound,
loud noises, bright lights, i can't get out, i can't get out i
have to push, push, something takes hold of my head and pulls me roughly, it
hurts, it is cold, i am separated from her, i am alone, there are people here
but i am alone, so alone she
holds me, she holds me, i am not alone I
AM NOT ALONE ©
Harvey Tordoff |